福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

my old friend lily ,is a 14-year-old girl who comes from the uk ,she can speak English and French, not only does she likes art ,but also likes beef noodles very much ,she is tall and thin with blonde hair ,she likes to wear t-shirt ,she usually watches tv in her free time ,but no sooner does she watches soap opera, than she change the channel at once, when she watches the sports shows ,her eyes were fixed on the tv,because she thinks sports shows are exciting and interesting and the soap opera ,however, is too boring