2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

The experience of success is the sum of time and perspiration. As the famous saying: Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration. Efforts play a high value on the importance of success which can not underestimate. In reality,mankind has through a long period of experience failure and success. Learn from experience and lessons then keep on working.A case in point is our result of the examination. There is no denying that without our precious time and perspiration we would not achieve anything great in our personal growth and improvement of score. With the high rapid of high technology,we can take full advantage of it which can shorten our precious time. Therefore, we must be more diligent and strong from thinking of its instead of impatient and irrespective. So called no pains no gains are in that means. In order to give enough time and energy from our life, it's necessary that we attach great importance to the consciousness of thinking about devoting time and patient in all ways. From my perspective, the spirit of not afraid of failure and insist on exerting yourself can never be overemphasized. There is not much to say that achieve success from time and perspiration as much as possible.As college students,it is high time that we paid close attention to it when we are in the period of study.