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How to make our life more meaningful in so limit time is a big problem to everyone. The views are different from person to person. So, what I want to do are three things. First, I will always persist in working hard and learning hard to shape a whole-life studying attitude.Because knowledge is power,which can continually improve our ability and further strength our mind.Such as saying going,"no pain, no gain." second,i will never give up helping others. Beacause i can get a lot of precious friendship and learn a lot during the proccess of helping others. Besides, when someday i need help, i will need not worry about that. finally,also the most important to me is doing whatever i want to. Human's life just be once.You should always do something you like to make you happy and to make your life more meaningful. In a word, don't wast your time, and just do something that you think is right and meaningful.
