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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
At present,more and more parents spoil children lead to a diffcult problem about children are independent.This notion has given to many problems for children’s grow-ups. Therefore, parents should learn to help their children to be independent. There are some suggestions given to parents. First at all,children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone in some matters,so that they are able to pursue what they want. For another, parents try to create some chances to exercise the kid.parents can give some family chores to their children properly because it is a good chance to train them.
