英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中衔接词丰富。

At present,more and more parents spoil children lead to a diffcult problem about children are independent.This notion has given to many problems for children’s grow-ups. Therefore, parents should learn to help their children to be independent. There are some suggestions given to parents. First at all,children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone in some matters,so that they are able to pursue what they want. For another, parents try to create some chances to exercise the kid.parents can give some family chores to their children properly because it is a good chance to train them. What is more, parents should not do all the things, they should ask the kids to finish on their own, parents can lead the kids to finish. In conclusion,We should know the fact that no parents can keep a good company with their children for the whole life. Thus, independent is very import.