内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中衔接词丰富。
At present,more and more parents spoil children lead to a difficult problem about children are independent.This notion has given to many problems for children’s grow-ups. Therefore, parents should learn to help their children to be independent. There are some suggestions given to parents. First at all,children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone in some matters,so that they are able to pursue what they want. For another, parents try to create some chances to exercise the kid.Parents can give some family chores to their children properly because it is a good chance to train them. What is more, parents should not do all the things, they should ask the kids to finish on their own, parents can lead the kids to finish. In conclusion,we should know the fact that no parents can keep a good company with their children for the whole life. Thus, independent is very import.