高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，注意文中有较多拼写错误。

In the past, my hometown was very beautiful,it was surrounded by the tree, the river is very clean and there are a lot of fishes in the river; There are many simple house in the narrow street; The life from the people's labour is very poor. Now, there are many tall buildings and factories in my hometown; there are a lot of cars that run in the street; The delvelopment of the industry makes the environment worst; The trees are reduced and the fishes are disappeared. The pllution is very serious, so we need to control the pollution immediately.