托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第6篇:大家庭是不是没以前那么重要了

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With the development of society，the extended family seems is less important now than it was，but is this a truth？ In my opinion，the modern life need extended families.When we live with too much pressure and can hardly breath，we often feel tense and longly，if we can not deal with it,it always leads to a big problem.In this situation, the ectended family may be more important for the people who needs encourage and support. In the other hand,the entended family aiways cause lots of trouble,it will become another pressure.We may get bored and tired from these pressure,and our ability will not equal to our ambition.These pressure fiom our daily life even will effect work's efficiency. Although,the disadvantages sounds terrible,the merits also necessary for the development of pesonal.And the extened family usually give people confidence and the encourage towards the future.In a modern world,everybody is not a independence,we need a extended family to save energy. Both modern world and modern life need extended family.