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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17594
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

In the lecture, the professor didn't agree with the content in the passage by several points. First of all, the passage mentioned that American people do not pay much attention on the product advertising. However the professor point out that the consumers do not treat all the advertising as the same kind. People pay more notice on the advistersment that launch by the private agency rather than the companys'. Furthermore, product having a ecologically-friendly label is more acceptable and favourable than any other commercials. Secondly, the professor agreed that American consumers care about the product price. But it need to be specified that the difference in price in a small amount, like 5%, would not affect the consumers decision a lot. By having a ecocertification label, the product will be more conving and attect the people to choose this product. Last but not least, American wood companies have to face both the foreign market and the domestic market. If the companies do not have a reason, protecting environment for instance, to show the American people their product is better then they might lose the domestic market.

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