2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

with the development of science and technology,The computer is becoming more and more popular.now, that on online shopping is become fashion.you must bought something on online.so you know its advantage and disadvantage.I have no word it is convient .it is indoorsy's favorite that on online shopping.if you live in small town ,there have many things don't sale compare big city.so, you can buy them on online.althought it is very convint and useful,it have many shortcoming.for example ,you couldn't feel it ,only look picture.you don't know how it is quality .everything have two saids,good said and bad said.Don't look one said,you should be carefully considered.