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The good behave is important for the internation communication.So, we have to let the public to have the good behave. I had seen alots of bad behave in the past.likes to spit every,to throw the rubbish every where,aslo,some to talk very loud in the public place,to disturb another one. so,according to this we have to have a good behave.