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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2267
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,Internet has connected well with our daily life.when we read some information,we use internet to research the information we need.We buy some goods in the internet and we use phone to communicate with others.What'more,when we go for a holiday to a strange city,we use phone to help us guide the road. In the terms of internet,different people have different opinions.Some people consider internet as a convenient vehicle which can make study and work more efficient. The others think teenagers pay more attention to internet so that they cannot try their best to study. As far as I am concerned,Internet is the two- edged sword to our daily life.On the one hand,It improves the quality of our life and makes life convenient.On the other hand,It is harmful to teenagers to study and work well.

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