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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11375
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。

用户练习作文:

With the development of economy, the progress of science and technology. Smart phones appear in the life of the increasingly high frequency. The impact on people is also growing, can be divided into three areas. The first point: the smart phone's information is great, it can meet the needs of all kinds of people, and the information update speed, timeliness strong, people can at any time to understand the latest social information. Second point: all kinds of applications on smart phones can satisfy people's interests. Such as learning, music, games, etc.. So basically meet the needs of people. Third point: people can even use the phone to make friends. There are a lot of social software, such as QQ, micro channel, microblogging, and so on. As the mobile phone function more and more powerful, more and more problems are exposed. First of all, people spend too much time on the phone, not only on the vision has great damage, but also people become more and more do not love sports, resulting in poor health. And often playing mobile phones will lead to insomnia. Secondly, People spend too much time on the phone, so that they neglect the friends and family. The most important is that, due to the over reliance on mobile phones, leading people to eat, cross the road are holding a cell phone, affecting travel safety. Finally, I think, we should use the mobile phone, so that the mobile phone is better for our service, but not affect my life.

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