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2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题TASK2

发布时间:2013-06-06 12:54浏览次数:853
要求:
Advertising which can be seen everywhere in daily life influences what people think is important and has negative effects.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

注意:这道题不要泛泛地写媒体的优劣势,而应集中在influence what people think is important.
提纲:
Negative:Manipulation of the mass in politics, consumption, value change  
positive:1.Call for national action for public interest 2.Promote awareness of some important issues

用户的作文(系统评分90.0分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

It is well-known that tremendous advertisement teems with our daily life,for example, the agency ads on the wall contain false information causing detrimental effects on customers' psychologies.Actually I reject entirely to higher exposure to advertising. Advertising will impede the national economic politics' development.The government's politics are carried out in accordance with their characteristics and differences in different stages. Disseminating product information induces potential consumers,so that intended users make unsophisticated judgments about impulsive purchase.The American financial crises exploded widely,which was mostly contributed by the promoting expenditure advertise disregarding as the overall social conditions. There will be long-term,subtle,and irreversible influence on the perception of values.Many advertisements make exaggerated claims about the properties of products.Bombarded with advertising unreally,in the long term,people will lose the ability of distinguishing right from wrong.The girls,who are extremely into the luxuries under the best-seller image of ads,represent more insensible than those who are out of ads.If the children are brought up in this circumstance,they will tend to represent permanent materialism. Admittedly,media power increases the intended users' desire to purchase and the companies' profits,but the consumers' destinations are worthy of being paid more attention.Whether they want and need to buy advertising goods is the determining factor we take it into consideration,rather than spending disposable income recklessly. Advertising has come into our sight and changed the conventional habits,resulting that modern people pursue the optimal profits and distort the perception of the original values.

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