福建长汀四中2012-2013学年九年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

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To be a greener person, I think we should do some of these things: We should remember the three R—reduce, reuse and recycle. We should use both sides of paper. We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room. We can collect waste paper or bottles for recycling. We’d better walk or ride a bike when we travel for a short distance. Take a cloth bag when we go shopping. Plant more trees every year. Don’t walk on grass or pick flowers. Don’t litter about or spit in public. We should do everything we can to protect our environment.