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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
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可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

The appearance is unimportant A public debate has arisen concerning why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.In the past years.The inhabitants always judge a person from thier appearance firstly.Many reasons should be responsible for this unpleasant situation. Recently,A increasing number of tv shows find out enormous teenagers ,because of thier appearance is extraordinary. on the contrary ,they didnot do well in enerywhere.The other side of the thing is quite show, it is unwise to judge a person by othier appearance.For example,Yanghuaibao is on of the best teebagers of China ,He is a litte and short boy .He is rarely handsome fortunately he is vary cute and kindly.we swarm to proud of him. As far as i am concerned ,appearance is one of one person. we must to touch them and lean obout them,maybe we will find the really heart of them.we should use a right way to deal with this problem.

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