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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Maybe the majority of us have heard of humorous saying,"Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I've done it hundreds of times."But have you ever thought about its implication?Undoubtdly,nothing succeeds without a strong will . Those who claim to have practiced smoking-quitting for hundreds of times do not have a strong will.Without a strong will,onc can never give up smoking once and for all,not to mention being successful in other endeavors.It is a strong will that contriutes to the success of the Olympic winner, that results in the spectacular victory of the 2010 World Expo,and that leads to the successful exploration of the moon. Where there is a will,there is a way.Only when the will is strongenough will the way lead us to success.