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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8976
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;词汇表达用的较丰富,另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

The appearance is unimportant A public debate has arisen concerning why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.But in the past years.The inhabitants always judge a man from thier appearance firstly.And many reasons should be responsible for this unpleasant situation. Recently,A increasing number of TV shows found out enormous teenagers ,because of thier appearance is extraordinary. on the contrary ,they are not well in everywhere.And the other side of the thing is quite show, it is not a better way to recognise people by otheir appearance.For example,Yanghuaibao is on of the best teebagers of China ,He is a litte and short boy .He is rarely handsome fortunately he is kindly.we swarm to proud of him. As far as i am concerned ,appearance is one of one person. we must to touch them and lean obout them,maybe we will find the really heart of them.we should use a right way to deal with this problem.

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