2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

On Excessive Packaging In the comtemporary society,excessive packaging have witness a boom in our life.Many people pay more attention to the packaging rather than the essential gift.To get a better sense of the boom,it is necessary for us to find out its causes. There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First,the commerical entrprises aim to benefit more by expensive and attractive packaging,because most of attractive packaging cost more money so that the enterprises can price more highly than before.Second,more and more consumers are willing to buy those present which have excessive packaging because of beautiful appearance.Account for this,it is a large market provide for the enterprises. From my point of view,this phenomenon in our society is passive.On the one hand,excessive packaging may waste plenty of resource which is limited on erath.On the other hand,excessive packaging will mislead customer keep a right consumption concept.Thus it is high time that we placed great emhasis on excessive packaging.