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Dear George: I am very glad to have received your letter in which you asked about household hotel in China. Generally speaking,household hotel is very nice to live in,not only can you better understand China,but also you will feel at home by dinning with the family .Of course,you can order or if the menu does not satisfy you,you can cook by your self.If you have enough time,you can bathe in the sea,go swimming and climbing,you can also do some work in the greenhouse if you'd like to .Another benefit of living in household hotel is that it is very cheap with 30yuan for single room per day and 20 yuan each for a double room,and you only have to pay 20yuan per day for the food. By the way,when you come to China this Summer,i can show a household hotel,i am sure you will enjoy it.