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On Excessive Packaging In the contemporary society,excessive packaging has witness a boom in our life.Many people pay more attention to the packaging rather than the essential gift.To get a better sense of the boom,it is necessary for us to find out its causes. There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First,the commerical enterprises aim to benefit more by attractive packaging,because most of the attractive packaging cost more money so that the enterprises can price more highly than before.Second,more and more consumers are willing to buy those present which have excessive packaging because of beautiful appearance.Account for this,it is a large market is provided for the enterprises. From my point of view,this phenomenon in our society is passive.On the one hand,excessive packaging may waste plenty of resources which is limited on earth.On the other hand,excessive packaging will mislead customer's consumption concept.Thus it is high time that we placed great emphasis on excessive packaging.
