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One of my foreign friends is going visit my hometown，and I would like to take him to see Beijing.Because Beijing as a capital of China，which included long history and culture，as well as some famous relics.I consider it is the best way to well konw about China through visiting the capital，let him feel chinese enthusiasm and common life.I plan to climb the Great Wall，visit the Forbidden City and Summer Palace，I really think these can represent our ancestors wits and diligence.Then we will have some local snacks ，it is a part of our culture，and it is a pity if you do not taste local food when you are traveling some places.Last but not least，I choose to watch a Beijing Opera with him，may be it is to difficult for him to understand,but we can not deny Opera isone of the most great cultures in China. that is all
