雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Nowaday, there is a phenomenon that more and moren people go to other countries for travelling, study and work. Compared with the past, it is more convenient and easier for people to go abroad. In my opinion, it develops a postive effect more than negative effect. I think there are several aspects can explaining why it develops a positive effect. Firstly, more and more people travel to other countries, and they bring our tradetional culture and artprints to other countries. it enlarges communication with other countries' people. Secondly, if more and more people travel to other countries, they will spend lots of money to buy plane tickets and other things to remember. I would poing out that it increases the flow of the money. Last one not the least, some people bring their children to go abroad in many cities. They see many landscapes and study different cultures in different countries. I think It enlarges the children' s scope. However, tracelling to other countries has also negative effect. If some people go abroad to other countries, they are not kindness and rude. It may influnce the figure of our country. So we need to remeber who we are and where we lived, which is very important I think. To sum up, I think that travelling to other countries has positive effect more that negetive effect.