雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

Nowadays, there is a phenomenon that more and more people go to other countries for travelling, study and work. Compared with the past, it is more convenient and easier for people to go abroad. In my opinion, it develops positive effects more than negative effects. I think there are several aspects explaining why it develops a positive effect. Firstly, more and more people travel to other countries, and they bring our traditional culture and art-prints to other countries. It enlarges communication with other countries' people. Secondly, if more and more people travel to other countries, they will spend lots of money buying plane tickets and other things to remember. I would poing out that it increases the flow of the money. Last one not the least, some people bring their children to go abroad in many cities. They see many landscapes and study different cultures in different countries. I think it enlarges the children' s scope. However, travelling to other countries has also negative effect. If some people go abroad to other countries, they are not kindness and gentle. It may influence the figure of our country. So we need to remember who we are and where we lived, which is very important I think. To sum up, I think that travelling to other countries has a positive effect more that negative effect.