语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活。
Education is the significant symbol of progress and prosperity of human civilization, which is also the core to push forward the development of economic society. In anthropic historical course, education undertake the mission and function which is not replaced, playing an important role. Long before 2,000 years, a classic called The Great Learning from ancient China once said that the purpose of learning is to manifest the virtue of human being, remodel others, persue to achieve the perfection thinking has been passed on for thousands years,still showing its thriving vitality.