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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。
Education is the important symbol of progress and prosperity of human civilization, which is also the core to push forward the development of economic society. In anthropic historical course, education undertakes the mission and function which is not replaced, playing a significant role. Long before 2,000 years, a classic called The Great Learning from ancient China once said that the purpose of learning is to manifest the virtue of human being, remodel others, pursue to achieve goodness which has been passed on for thousands years,still showing its thriving vitality.
