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what is a smart consumer for student when money comes in our lives ,manage becomes duty .As a student,I think "a smart consumer "means "manage money". When we are careful with our money in daily life ,we have become a manager of our limited money. For most of us ,our living expenses are often from our parents,and generally speaking ,we don't have other economical source,so it is important to learn how to manage it. Collecting all kinds of coupons or looking for group-buy deals for student has meant that using finite money to infinite things .We can use the rest of money which we saved to do other things.In our daily lives ,managing money matters has become an extremely important thing .Different people have different way to use their living expenses .Some can have good in managing their money ,thus they can do all kinds of things they like .Others only can do a few things because they are not good at managing money matters,even become moonlite In my opinion ,saving money at the same thing means a smart consumer .Taking all factors into consideration, group-buy or collecting coupons and others is a wise move for student who should be refered to as a smart consumer.
