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The main difference between my college life and my middle school life. In middlle school,we almost have a full with busy every day.for example ,we must wake up at six o'clock,and then we arrive to classroom and reading louldy,after class we will have been a variety of homework.expect,we have no freedom,this is different from college,In college,we have enough freedom,and have no people to control you.we can do ourselves want to do something,the most important things that we can make boyfriend or girlfriend,but,It can't be in Middle school,In college,we can sleep and go shopping or play games and so on in weeks but in middle school,we must have a class in weeks,this is different from college life and I love college life and have a good time.