高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中句子错误偏多了；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写方面要认真；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

In the past: green home town; The river clear fish play; Housing humble narrow streets; Working people living in poverty; Now: high-rise buildings factory store standing; Size vehicle along the streets; Industrial development environment deterioration; Trees reduce the fish disappeared; Pollution control priority. My hometown is very beuaful,i love my hometown