2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

高级词汇能比较准确的使用，不过拼写错误稍多；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；从句数量偏少，应增加文中从句和复合句的使用。

With the development of the global economy,the relationship between human and computer is more and more closer.Adimittedly,computers act as a perfect assistant in our daliy life.Its intelligence is higher than our huaman ,with everything can be completed instantly.What's more, computers such as smart phones,televisons,electronic watches have generally occupied our space time and run out of limited energy,which cause so many problems.