2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hello,now I am tell you about my hometown's interestingplaces.First it is Tiaowang island,which was famous by people all over the world.it is very tall,about 1400 metres.If you watch it from long instance. it looks like a flying bird.that is why it is famous.Sencod it's The City in the sky.Although it seems like imazing,it is a city in the worth.Because it is big and plendid,as like a city that never have in the world,that is its name come from.I can't wait to see you and take you to see our hometown.You will in surprised.