简单句偏多了;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
good friend In my lief.I have some friends.We are very happy.So they are my good friend.I love my and they.We are ofend play.Sometimes we are fright.I have some good friend in my school.and my teachers and parents is my good friend.They ofend help me to do some things.Give me some happily.