2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；全文结构较为严谨。

It's universally conceived that the quality of life has represented a apparant decreasing trend caused by various and distinct reasons such as the high-pressures and the fast-paced life.The major problem-solving measures we can take need to be paid more attention. The fundmental reason leading to the decline is contributed by the psychological gap between the expectation and the reality.The employment pressure lessen the possibility of a bright job prospect with the disappointment to the craving for the new chances,which is followed by the increasing unemployment and criminal rate.The graduates suffer from the so competitive stress that more and more students lose faith in the society and prefer to stick out the school rather than surging into the metropolis.The environment degradation has made detrimental effects on human's healthies.The deteriarate environment such as greenhouse gas emission and reckless use of the disposable items shows converse outcomes with our imagnations of the thourough convergence of the human races and the environment,as a result,we must assume responsibility at the cost of the psycality. To cultivate a good state of mind is the determining factor to cope with the bitter disappointment.