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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇表达灵活;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

There is a growing recognition of fact that a great many people,women particularly,pursuing the good appearance by various methods.In some aspects,one will be provided more opportunity to acquire sucess who has good appearance.But it has not just one standard to judge a person.As a consequent,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. Some reasons can be provided to support my arguments.Firstly,with the rapid development of secense and technology ,many people,if not most,choose to makeup completely in hospital,which is a prevalent and pervasive phenomenon.In addition,the spirits of persistant,courage and creation also play an indispensable role in people's development.A good case in point is Steven Jobs,a former CEO of APPLE Inc.His products such as Iphone and Macbooks have completely changed the way people live and communicate.No one can deny that his success largely due to his creation and persistant. On my personal level,the development of independence,persistance and creation is of significance for people rather than appearance.I am firmly convinced that it would not necessarily a good thing to judge a person by their appearance.

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