小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good if Miss Li, she is 6 years old, she is a primary school student, she like red. She play computer at eight o'clock From Monday to Friday . she like cooking dinner for all family people, her mother often busy and goes back at nine o'clock. Miss Li always waits her mother at gate and give her mother a cup of hot water. She love her mother very much