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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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The way to success Many people want to succeed in a short run.However,the way to success is a long run with good virtue like willpower,diligence,determination and so on.As a proverb says,”Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”. The process to the success is tough and lengthy.There are many successful examples in our life.For instance,Mother Teresa,winner of the Nobel Peace Prize,dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India,thus gaining her the name”Saint of the Gutters”.The devotion to the poor won her respect throughout the world and the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.She founded an order of nuns called the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta,India dedicated to serving the poor.Almost 50 years later,the Missionaries of Charity have grown from 12 sisters in India to over 3,000 in 517 missions throughout 100 countries worldwide. To sum up,Mother Teresa’s success goes for a long way with determination and kindness.It’s true that the way to success is long and tough.Only when we overcome many setback,can we reach the successful summit finally.

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