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As we know,it is unwise to make a conclusion immediately when we heard something and what we seen.We should judge things more objective,if we judge thing in its appearance that we easy make mistakes.All thing needed evidence,because people are esay influenced by people who he or she got well with.As myself for an example,one of my friends was qurarrelled with her friend,and she complain with me that make me have prejudice with her friend,even hated her.But when I know the fact that it's my friend exaggerate the fact,and it's my friends error,i feel a little shamed with my self.After that i learn a lesson that don't judge thing on appearance,it may confuse you,and it is unwise doing like that. Judge thing more objective,to be a wise man!
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