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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40881
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

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As we know,it is unwise to make a conclusion immediately when we heard something and what we seen.We should judge things more objective,if we judge thing in its appearance that we easy make mistakes.All thing needed evidence,because people are esay influenced by people who he or she got well with.As myself for an example,one of my friends was qurarrelled with her friend,and she complain with me that make me have prejudice with her friend,even hated her.But when I know the fact that it's my friend exaggerate the fact,and it's my friends error,i feel a little shamed with my self.After that i learn a lesson that don't judge thing on appearance,it may confuse you,and it is unwise doing like that. Judge thing more objective,to be a wise man!

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