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Ladies and gentlemen: Welcome to Nanjing! First of all, i want to tell you something about this famous city.Nanjing,the capital of Jiangshu province,has a population of about 5 million. With a history of 2400 years,this city has been the capitals of 10 dynasties. Apart from its long history,Nanjing is also well known for its beauty with so many places of interest,such as Xuanwu Lake,the Jiming temple, the stone city and so on. Nanjing is also a very modern city where you can see factories and tall buildings almost everywhere. I hope you will have a great time here! Thank you!
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