在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
My good Friend is my ladybro.She is tall and thin,she is very beautiful and smart.She can share happiness or sadness with me.She can be frendly to me ,she should be more careful than herself.She goes shopping and swimming with me.We also together go traveling She is my close friend.A friend in need is a friend indeed.