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My opinion on certificate craze Nowadays,many people are crazed in all kinds of certificate examination,especially the college students.However,this phenomenon arises wide concern that whether this phenomenon is bad or not. There are many varied reasons why people are crazed in all kinds of certificate examination.To begin with,the certificate,a paper,can prove your particular ability helping you seek for a job.When seeking for a job,a firm would more likely to employ a college student with more superior certificate.There is no other efficient evidence to replace the certificate.In addition,achieving all kinds of certificate can prove your prominent ability.Thus,some people are crazed in collecting all kinds of certificate obtaining a sense of satisfaction.What’s more,some people participate in all kinds of certificate examination just because their friends are crazed in them. To sum up,through certificate examination,people’s ability can be proved.As a college student,in my opinion,I am fond of all kinds of certificate examination for earning more opportunity when I rival the job with others.However,we should be good at your own major and participate in its superior certificate.Only in this way,can we take part in the other kind of certificate examination.