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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
The importance of using money carefully Nowadays there are more and more people spend all of their money that they earn in a month.They are called Moonlite.But is it good?Absolutely not.Because as the Chinese,we are proud of saving. In my view,most of us,as students,should use our money more carefully.Because we as students,we can not earn by ourselves.The all money we use comes from our parents.Especially the condition that is not very good.There are a lot of ways to use our money carefully.For example,we can buy cloth when it's on sale.Avoid to do anything that costs a lot of money.We also can collect all kinds of coupons. In a word,using money carefully makes us smart consumer.It not only can save lots of money,but also make us use money effectively.
