2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Nowadays,modern time is devoloping in advance,technic and science is devolopingtoo,people'life have asolutely improving.this is fit for people'wanted. It seems to said "People are crossing the street looking at their phones and using walking sticks in order to see."the appearance is more and more common ,now, people have been rely on cell phones, they feel that cell phones isn't a lack of in their life,they have been overuse cell phones,whenever,people will take a cell phones in hand,because of technicl and secience,it is necessary of modern times in advance.and it is lead to people' life of change.