2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。

Nowadays,modern time is developing in advance,technic and science is devolopingtoo,people'life have asolutely improving.This is fit for people'wanted. It seems to say "People are crossing the street looking at their phones and using walking sticks in order to see."the appearance are more and more common ,now, people have rely on cell phones, they feel that cell phones isn't a lack of in their life,they have been overuse cell phones,whenever,people will take a cell phones in hand,because of technicl and science,it is necessary of modern times in advance.and it lead to people's life of change.