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It was the happiest moment that I have ever experienced, which I was so excited at the day before the Mid-Autumn festival. Not only was my birthday that day, and we were going to have a big family meal. I love my family so impressed that I can hardly find words to express it. To celebrate my birthday, my parents asked all of my family members to come home and have a meal. The big family meal began with hugs and lots of excitement. Happily, it reminded us that we are connected by both blood and love. There was no doubt that we had numerous things to talk about before the meal began. My mother told about a funny story of me when I was five years old. I was very naughty at that time, and nobody could ask me for sugars. How shamed I was! However, we all giggled a lot. As you can see, we enjoyed the moment we stayed with each other. At the meal began, we ate some palatable food. Everybody picked up the best food in my bowl. Actually, I was deeply moved without saying words because it made me feel loved. My family wants to give me the best things, and I always have the best things. Even today I go to college but I know that no matter how far away we were, our love for each other would never change. Time marched on relentlessly. It was time for us to say good-bye. In fact, all good things must come to an end. As for me, the best birthday’s gift was that my family was together. In a word, people have always been fascinated by the relationship between family members. I can’t wait for the next big family meal to come.
