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This sentence is very thought."Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them."That because we are in a world fulls of difficulties.It is necessary for us to live a happy life by overcome difficulties and meet chanlenges,which means we must be upgrade our ability. In day life.It is not a simple thing to improve our ability,this is a long-term proceess.First and also the most important thing.When we meet problems,the best way to deal with them is go straight at them.In this process,we can improve our ability of faceing problem and also fell more proud and confident when we solve problems.second,we should learn to seek outside help.Sometimes,you might be puzzled,teacher can instrut us.Finally ,we should improve our ability through small things,things are not small,the most important is we can learn more and improve ourselves though those small things. To conclud,be happy is easy.life is always fulls problems and chanlenges,that is life ,that is colorful and happy life.
