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文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中衔接词丰富；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
This sentence is very thought."Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal in them."That because we are in a world fulls of difficulties.It is necessary for us to live a happy life by overcome difficulties and meet chalenges,which means we must upgrade our ability. In life.It is not a simple thing to improve our ability,this is a long-term process.The first and most important thing.When we encounter problems,the best way to deal with them is to go straight at them.In this process,we can improve our ability of faceing problem and also fell more proud and confidant when we solve problems.Second,we should learn to seek outside help.Sometimes,you might be puzzled,teacher can instruct us.Finally ,we should improve our ability through small things,things are not small,the most important is we can learn more and improve ourselves though those small things. To conclud,be happy is easy.Life always fulls problems and chalenges,which is life,that is colorful and happy life.
