采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
This sentence is very thought."Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal in them."That because we are in a world fulls of difficulties.It is necessary for us to live a happy life by overcome difficulties and meet challenges,which means we must upgrade our ability. As we all know.It is not a simple thing to improve our ability,this is a long-term process f faceing problem and also fell more proud and confidant when we solve problems.Second,we should learn to seek outside help.Sometimes,you might be puzzled,teacher can instruct us.Finally ,we should improve our ability through small things,things are not small,the most important is we can learn more and improve ourselves though those small things. To conclud,be happy is easy.Life always fulls problems and challenges,which is life,that is colorful and happy life.