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2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:22浏览次数:6166
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题目 Free admission to museums
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1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?
2.也会带来一些问题
3.你的看法?
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Nowadays more and more museums don't make any charge for people.There are a few people to visit museum if the museum need ticket.Because people would rather pay more money to amusement parks and aquaria for fun than take small money to museums.As we all know,the park are more charming and vivid.Free admission to museums can attract more people to here,we can easier to know chinese culture and the long history.The more people came the more expense will take.You can sold some sourviners present,privider some food and so on. There are lots of people the administrator should management more gurds to protect the relic.what's more it will make lots of rubish,so the circumstance of the museum needs every to obey the rule.If soomeone break the rule,he will get punished. In my oppinion,I agree that.It is a good way for us to in contract with Chinese history face to face.We should remember the people and the hagiography of the plotters.

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