采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
This sentence is very thought."Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal in them."That because we are in a world fulls of difficulties.It is necessary for us to live a happy life by overcome difficulties and meet challenges,which means we must upgrade our ability. As we all know.It is not a simple thing to improve our ability,this is a long-term process. First and it is also the most important point,when we encounter problems,the best way to deal with them is to go straight at the.In this process,we can improve our ability to face problems and also fell prouder and confidant when we solve those problems.Second,we should learn to seek outside help.Sometimes,we might be puzzled,so there is no doubled that we need teacher to instruct us. Finally, we should improve our ability through small things.Because things are not small in general,the most important is we can learn more and improve ourselves though those small things. To conclud,be happy is easy.Life always fulls problems and challenges,which is life,that is colorful and happy life.