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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

用户练习作文:

This sentence is very thought."Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal in them."That because we are in a world fulls of difficulties.It is necessary for us to live a happy life by overcome difficulties and meet challenges,which means we must upgrade our ability. As we all know.It is not a simple thing to improve our ability,this is a long-term process. First and it is also the most important point,when we encounter problems,the best way to deal with them is to go straight at them.In this process,we can improve our ability to face problems and also fell prouder and confidant when we solve those problems.Second,we should learn to seek outside help.Sometimes,we might be puzzled,so there is no doubled that we need teacher to instruct us. Finally, We should improve our ability through small things.Because we known things are not small substantially,the most important is we can learn more from it and improve ourselves though those small things. In conclusion,to be happy is easy.Life always fulls problems and challenges,which is life,which is colorful and happy life.

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